Audience circuit
The question stays the same: “Could anyone call this quiet?” Make it an invitation to agree: share the noisy evidence and remove the request for a spoken answer. Change the scene, not the punctuation.
♬ ✷ ♫Scene evidenceThree drummers are rehearsing in the room.
◉ ◉ ◉The audience is elsewhere, with no sound feed.
Could anyone call this quiet?
An answer is requested.